Student Evaluation

I would grade this film quite high; about 50/60.

I like this piece because of the wide range of camera angles and the added effects in editing, like the slow motion, and the layering of various shots on top of one another. The music works well with the video, and the ending is very suspenseful, however not entirely necessary. 

To improve this piece, I would remove the last 15 seconds, as I think it works better with a calm and confusing ending. I would also taper off the music at the end into a melodic instrumental piece. I would also improve the title sequence, as it looks like they added it as an after thought, without considering it's aesthetics and effect on the overall piece.